French chanson style pop song (with english refrain, feat. fenix)

Recently searching for vocal clips on Splice, I stumbled upon Fenix singing 'You are my sunshine' which pretty amazed me, because it's one of the very first sounds she uploaded after her registration as Splice user... and we all thought she was a spoken word artist only, didn't we? Of course I had to take this opportunity to create a little duet, singing it with her as refrain. Since I actually wanted to write a typical french chanson at this time, I had to improvise a bit and made some french verses about this sun topic. Unfortunately I used my cheap headphones (no bass power) for mixdown... the result was a bass overdrive when played via hifi boxes. However, regarding the song's warm character, this unintended mellowness is barely acceptable.

Lyrics:
You are my sun, all days, all nights.
Doesn't matter when, what you do, what you say.
When you slumber, you're silence among the noises
For you're a haven, a haven of peace, my girl.
When you speak, it's like music,
When you dance, the angels are awakening.
Like you are, it's so wunderful,
Like you are, you are my sun.
You are my sun since the first time.
It was strange, I didn't have the choice.
They judge you as hard, but me, I don't believe them,
For you're the light, the brightest one for me.
All people are afraid of you and your mysticism.
When they talk big I turn a deaf ear.

Remix note: The original and all embedded clips can be found on Splice (http://www.splicemusic.com/songs/Asaguare/tu-es-mon-soleil).