uhmm .... i would have left a comment saying " the drums sound like an old man , the bass is a little off , and the last lead should be removed " but that would make me a bad person, so instead i did this. New drums baby, and a few other bits. Anyway my point is that you need more umphhh in your drums , a steady rythm ( i mean the bass doesn't need to go up and down like it's on fire , and no cheesy leads for this kind of stuff ).

Hope you like your little project :P

edit .. i forgot to put the open hihats xD